Journal #10

There is a definite difference between the two forms, in the way it is written. In the first of the two, it seems that person or narrator or whoever it is seems to be a lot less confident or precise in what they are trying to convey. The second of the two seems to give more precise timing and distance of what he is going to do. However, they both seem to say about the same information. The second piece also gives much more information of what the main character of the page, or the narrator is thinking at the time.